My Virgin Glade
My Virgin GladeA winsome rain touched soft my virgin gladeatop peony and blue hosta leaf,where oaken arms caress carnations shade,vermilion fleur-de-lis surpass belief.A delphic auspice where my...
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Hello S.I like nature poems, and enjoyed your pretty use of language.Too many wheres, I think, and I'm not sure about the winsome rain.Regards,David
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Hi Shy--The highlight for me was line 12, which was descriptive and unaffectedly eloquent. "Cache" seems just the right verb, unexpected and to the point. In contrast, line one's "touched soft" seemed...
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Hello, Shy.I'll add my second to the commentary you've already received. In addition, I need to praise your eloquent and beautiful use of language here. Very alluring phraseology.Thanks for the read.
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Hi everybody! Sorry I haven't answered earlier, I almost forgot I put this here. How's that for an attention span? LOL! Thank you so much for commenting. David? Gee you're sure right about the...
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The sonnet "My Virgin Glade" is utterly lovely. There is very little to complain of, when viewed collectively, rather than solely as individual lines. Loveliness emanates forth from every line. The...
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Hi shy,I liked this, simple and celebratory in tone, full of the promise of early summer.My favourite line:vermilion fleur-de-lis surpass belief.The only bit I don't quite 'get' is the last line, but...
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Lovely, Shy! I feel such a relaxed innocence here....and would dearly like to drop in and visit! You can feel justifiably pleased with your latest effort....and you have inspired me, as well.Hard to...
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Laurie, you've captured so well here the complex beauty of your special place. So picturesque and peaceful - I'm transported by your gentle and colourful description.I would suggest you conclude L2...
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Hi Charles, Alan, Lary and Peter! I can't begin to tell you how much I appreciate your wonderful comments! I'm beginning to feel like a broken record replying to this poem, everyone's been soooo...
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